@hack69 I didn't notice any mistakes (my Japanese isn't perfect though) however I did notice some improvements overall to _Ka Rin's (Wa Lin/媧燐)_ lines. So there is that. _Gut so danke schön_.
@hack69 One thing I forgot to mention was the names. Some of the names of the peeps & "Forces" are wrong. They are in the Japanese way, not the Chinese.
@NodMan Yup, they're meant to be in the Japanese. That's the point of my edit.
The Funimation subs use the Chinese names if you're interested. https://nyaa.iss.one/view/1389423
@ninfan Sorry, I ripped the previous chapters because they were missing in general, now you can find the official ones anywhere just by googling it. (I'm not sure if linking is fine here, but it's literally on most aggregate websites).
@NodMan Thanks and no problem, mate. Do what you prefer, I'm just adding an extra option.
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